Thursday, October 28, 2010

Mother to Son Response poem

Mother, I'm stumbling in life
sometimes wanting to stop trying
 but I'm not givivng up.
 My life is like a crystal stair, falling is no option. Even if it may hurt

I'll climb that crystal stair all the way to the top.
So mom, I'm not giving up
I'll never give up sooner or later, my life will be and will always be a crystal stair.

1 comment:

  1. Your response to the poem Mother and Son is emotionally connectable. You explain and take the poem seriously and this is a really good response poem. Great job.

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